Wednesday, April 4, 2012

What my character needs

I have got two children's books that I want to send out to agency's, my concern is that young children don't have the patients to plough through a story.  And that my characters desperate need isn't strong enough.  I compare my story to thing like Charlie and the Chocolte Factory, and Charlie's desparate longing for a gold ticket and I find my stories lacking.

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